a) it says it was last updated 1/10, yet it includes information about the iPad that was released on 1/27.
b) the sentence that references the iPad has a rather awkward construction:
Apple recently introduced the iPad, a breakthrough Internet and digital media device, plus the iBookstore, alongside iTunes and the App Store.
Sure, these details are hardly earth shattering or of great import; it's just the little things you come across while waiting for Apple to post some real information about the iBookstore.
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